Caligula's Launderette

Yes, cause I can type. I already found 3 mistakes. Oh Tim, can I quote you? :D Well lets see what a new look on this poem does to it, ...

Xan, no problemo dear. :D Colier, this certainly needs a lot of work, thank you for commenting on it. (Pssst - go look at some of my others, they are ...

I don't know if fishr has gotten back to you on tides but here are some useful things. Description of riptide - ; its presented here much more coherently than ...

Luke, I'm blushing. Thank you all for your comments. I didn't know it would be that well received, cause I was bucking my own traditions in how I write writing ...

ooooh, shivers. I agree with Xan on that line, perhaps: that fell from the clouds enveloping me; I especially like the first two lines and the first line in stanza ...

I don't understand why people are dissing this. It's such an insightful cultural and social commentary. It's so BEAUTIFUL! :D Ditto what Mesh said.

You captured me at She wzas t he CHOSEN ONE . Ditto on what Dusky said.

squee! No, this helps me lots. I have this tendency to over describe, note: it used to be awful, I keep those old pieces around for amusement. I did up ...

I forgot, it's exam time isn't it? Those evil, evil exams. Well good luck! :D

Thanks Jack! I am glad you liked it. So glad that you got things... So the story goes... My grandparents had a charter boat, a 44 ft crusier down in ...

me likes the revised edition. :D moshes to Snow Patrol. and there was no there to experience it alongside. - should this be no one there from snow to rain ...

Hmm, yes, I should probably clarify time line *pounds head into desk*, silly me. AU, as Lucius is out of Azkaban, and also I think you have confused Belle with ...

ahhh spamming..... run away! run away! Oh good false alarm. It's like setting off the school fire alarm system while burning popcorn in Study Hall. Thanks for the crit Griff, ...

No, no point came across very well. I was just looking at it structurally. Perhaps, take out the word 'choose', hmm... really it's fine the way it is now. CL

Thank you all, well it leeched me, so there will be more a lot more. I am just tying things together, I had a Point A and a Point C, ...